“Majesty”

The first line of this one came to me during a walk. The rest, something of a lover’s lamentation, unfolded from that.

“Majesty”

Flying over emeralds, diamonds in the sky
Sapphire flowers bloom;
Chrysanthemums that rise
Cover me in silver lights
Help me find a better high
And be my blushing garnet
Even if for just tonight

Tulips grant new life as lilacs serenade
Orchids adore fire;
Ash to cover jade
Woven leaves of gold cascade
Under filigree that hangs
Will you be my vibrant rose,
Or drown me in your bloodstains?

© 2018 Andrew Drennen

Photograph by Lisa Stivers

My Thoughts

I feel like the general meaning of the poem is fairly self-explanatory. Instead, I just wanted to make a quick note in reference to how the stanzas are constructed.

It was intentional to have the first stanza use gems as its primary metaphor, with only a single flower reference in it. And conversely, I would have the second stanza use flowers as its primary metaphor, with only a single gemstone reference.

A small, simple thing, it was a simple experimentation I was playing with, something borne of boredom.

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